new blogger trying to make money.

[Robert Kincaid]

I'm trying make money by teaching others how to learn a new language in my blog. My blog address is www.leerkscorner.blogspot.com. constructive criticism welcomed. Thanks!

[Tristan]

Hi, Robert. I think it would be much more visually effective if you break up some of your text, place some of it in an outline, space out your paragraphs a bit more, etc. Personally, I found the formatting distracting, making it a little difficult to read.

For ideas, you may want to check out some popular blogs (perhaps ChristianPF.com!), and note how the authors format their ideas. You won't attract a ton of readers if your formatting isn't visually appealing -- no matter how good the content is.

After that, it's on to spell checking and grammar checking. This is another crucial component to an effective article.

[johnsmith]

Hi, Robert. I think it would be much more visually effective if you break up some of your text, place some of it in an outline, space out your paragraphs a bit more, etc. Personally, I found the formatting distracting, making it a little difficult to read.

For ideas, you may want to check out some popular blogs (perhaps ChristianPF.com!), and note how the authors format their ideas. You won't attract a ton of readers if your formatting isn't visually appealing -- no matter how good the content is.

After that, it's on to spell checking and grammar checking. This is another crucial component to an effective article.

Of course, well said Triston. Thats a should follow factor.